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Which do I wish to talk about:
Should I describe her lovely face?
Or rather discuss the kindness inside
The elegance and the grace?

For hours could be spent
On the beauty that you see
But you'd never quite do justice
To her beauty's true degree.

The flash of her soft eyes
The wide, loving smiles
Even just one would be enough
To weather life's hardest trials

How her hair frames her face
How you live to see her blush and grin
And how despite how much it embarrasses her
You can't wait to do it again

But is this it? Of course not.
To her, this is only part.
For there's another half, that I briefly mentioned
So let us go back now to the start.

Of her elegance and grace, she's difficult to compare
To any other I've come across
For if you tried to find another so caring
You'd find yourself at a loss.

When one kind word is all it takes,
To warm you from inside and out
It's hard to imagine, with these kind words
How you ever lived without.

Because in this girl you can find exquisiteness
Whether in her looks or in her heart
And it's then you realize you've found a friend
And a love that will never part.
©2006-2010 ~sir-sExile
:iconsir-sexile:

Author's Comments

Took me forever to write, not from lack of material to work with I promise. But I was kinda drunk (which explains why it doesnt flow as well as it should) and for some reason, writer's block seemed to be a bitch.

Either way, if I were to sit down, I could probably write 3 more if asked to (sober). Not that hard, considering who the subject is. ;)

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Prettyyyyy! Whoever it was written for is very lucky, I think.

--
The pollution looks pretty at sunset,
the days here are disgustingly dreary and gray.
Love me for who I am,
all alone in Charlieworld.
Darling, you don't know the half of it.

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